Mexal's Reviews

[Game Grumps 3d #02]

I've never laughed so hard in such a long time!

[Game Grumps 3d #03]

This is really well done. The mouth animations were flawless. Make more please. :)

~ Mexal

Esquirebob responds:

I have a couple more coming to newgrounds soon, but currently I'm working on an original animation, After that though, who knows :D

[Through Fear and Pain]

Main issue I have with this tune is that your percussion sounds very bland. It sounds like you're just using generic VEC samples.

You also need some more variation in your chord progression. Nothing really changes.

Sorry if this review sounds harsh, but I don't have those "average listener" ears if you know what I mean. I also like to keep my points short and sweet so that it can really get into your head. ;) Keep practicing.

~ Mexal

SoulofT responds:

Yeah the percussion is mostly VEC samples, I just don't really know where else I can get better percussion lol :p

About the chord progression, in the past I've changed it up and was told that in electronic music it is preferable to stick to a particular progression, so that comment has me confused lol.

Don't worryy about sounding harsh, at least your giving your honest opinion on what you think are the flaws and what you think this song deserves. I can respect that :)

Thank you for your feedback!

[Voiz]

First part of the track was SICK! Creative melodies and all, but it all got ruined when you added a completely different second part. Man if you just kept on going with the first part I would've probably masturbated to this. Serious. (maybe).

But yeah, keep making this stuff. Lastly, make sure to brighten up the high end. It was lacking a bit.

~ Mexal

[KH - Dearly Beloved REMIX]

The intro is alright. You should change that string sample to a better one. It just sounds a bit too cheesy.

When the beat comes in, it is pretty solid. However, everything just feels like it has way too much high end. Including the bass. Remember, each sound should have its own frequency spot, if you know what I mean.

Keep at it.

~ Mexal

djahmusic responds:

Thanks for this informative comment :)